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As the bus speeds by on the highway I rest my head against the window. I stare out into the open fields scrolling by.

There isn’t much to see…until I see a tree.

It stands all alone, watching motorists drive by.

The tree is old and skinny; the lower branches are bare and rotted.
But the top of the tree is covered with vivid green leaves, softly reflecting the sun’s rays. It’s almost as if the tree is wearing a bright emerald crown, standing alone with great elegance.

I then notice the sea of green at the back of the fields.

Hundreds of trees stand side by side, looking at the royal tree from afar. Their leaves are a dull green and reflect no light.
I cannot pick out individual trees; they all smear into a green blur.

But in front of the blur the single tree stands close to the highway, greeting passers-by.

In five seconds the tree is gone from my sight.

I sit back and think to myself:

‘Will anyone else acknowledge the bravery and generosity of this tree?’
©2007-2009 ~TheNeuf
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Written during my trip to North Dakota.
Seeing trees like this reminds me of how society can alienate individuals…and how those individuals can stand strong and be proud of who they are.

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:iconpausilove:
You're right, it does remind me of individuals and society as a whole. I love how you portray it. :) You use great descriptions, too. It's almost like I'm there seeing the trees myself.

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:icontheneuf:
^^; Well, thank you very much :blushes:
It's funny how often you see this kind of thing when you drive through the country.
:iconpausilove:
Yeah, I know what you mean. I live in out the sticks, and I do a lot of thinking as I'm watching the rustic scenes go by. :3

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:iconshadow-wings-89:
Another nice one, I like the way the tree represents an individual and the forest, society =)

And: '… how those individuals can stand strong and be proud of who they are.' u r so right there =D

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:iconscaredycat:
We once had a tree like that.. It was huge, ancient, and wore but a tuft of leaves near the top. It watched over that highway diligently, but about three years ago it was cut down. I'm probably one of the few who was sad when it was gone.

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"I spoke untruths, and they believed them. I believed them. And now I look back and see, it was all a lie. Now I forget, for what is not remembered does not exist. And so I become a purer being, for I have told no lies."
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Aww, that's so sad :(
Poor tree...who will look over the highway?

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Although the tree is no longer alive, it's roots run deep, still holding that patch of earth together. And there are other trees.. little, but they'll be great one day.

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"I spoke untruths, and they believed them. I believed them. And now I look back and see, it was all a lie. Now I forget, for what is not remembered does not exist. And so I become a purer being, for I have told no lies."
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Well put :D
Isn't nature amazing? It gives us so much! :)

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